
Areas of work I think I could improve on would be the size of my drawing. I think I should make it bigger and more to scale, make it fill the page more. Also I should proportion more things such as the size of the leaf compared with the conker and what part of the natural form is touching another. I would obviously finish with the water to make it finished and to get use more darker tones to show more deeper shading of where the light is coming from, and to also show the naturally darker places of the forms this would make my work more realistic.
Areas of my work I think worked well was the effect of the bleeding ink. This was my first time using this technique and I think it worked well with my drawing and with the natural forms. I really liked the cloudy effect it had given and think it worked well as a whole piece of art. I also really like the web design we had drawn on, all the different lines made it look like the leaf had veins running all through it, and when the water was added it meant that I was able to make more shaded tones and go darker and lighter in some places because of the individual parts of the leaf.
To extend my skills I will look further at how to use this technique effectively so I am able to complete my work and try out the technique this will make my work progress as I will start to get used to techniques and enable me to use these techniques on other work I do.
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I really like this artwork as it look so realistic and the use of water to show light tones and to use it to also show the darker has been use effectively and properly. What I would take from this would be the appropriate use of the water. I think this because the use of water to show the tone is done really well and I think that if I was to do this it would add more detail to my work.
In this session 17th September carrying on from the fine liner drawings we were then asked to draw the natural forms again but this time using a dip pen and black ink. Materials that were used for this task were cartridge paper, dip pen and black ink. The technique used for this task was cross hatch. after drawing with the dip pen and ink we then used cross hatching to show darker tones of the forms. This was done by drawing thin lines close together going in a different direction forming cross hatching.
Areas of my work I think worked well was the drawing itself, the proportion of the different natural forms. They all were in proportion with each other and the scale was small but everything was proportional. Also I think the little cross hatching I had done worked well and look effective showing the darker areas of them.
Areas of my work I think could be improved would be the size and scale of my whole drawing I would try and increase the size of it because I think it looks too small and I would try and fill the page more. Also this would give me more opportunity to use cross hatching as there would be a bigger shape for me to show tone and shading.
To extend my skills I will look at other peoples work such as peers out of my group, and see how they have used this technique and how it has made their work look like and the effect it has given. Also I will Google and search other dip pen and ink work and research how to use them properly and how other people use it.





